Oh yeah, ignore the 2nd row of the first page, the crossed out lines. I didn't like it anymore.
Edit #2: I wanted to change how I do the transition from the interior of the restaurant to the roof shot with anzu eating her loot. I'm going to pan up from the interior of the restaurant after she steals everything and fade out to black and then fade in while still panning up to her eating on the roof. This is so that I can try and make sure the audience know's its on the roof of the restaurant.


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